Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Week 3 Poem, inspired by D.H. Lawrence

Gone Fishing

I placed my fishing stick in the sea
On a warm, blue-skied day.
As I sat above and looked down into the
Other world, I saw him appear,
A blur at first, but steadily clearer.
He was stunning
With his swirls of
Yellow and turquoise and silver,
Admiring, craving the shrimp that slyly
Concealed the hook’s point.

On the far side of the bay,
The shore was sharp and the current strong.
The waves were furious,
Snapping against the rocks like a lion tamer’s
   whip.
But here, the waves sweetly
   caressed
And nurtured the trap, my trap,
Making a sweet cradle with its rolling ripples,
Seductively calling my prey closer.

The fish swam nearer and then
   farther
And then in circles, slowly and around,
Like a child’s merry-go-round
   he turned,
Stopping before the bait and watching,
Admiring it like a gluttonous man
Admires the cake he is about to devour.
But no attack.

Did he know?
Had he discovered my cleverly devised
   trap?
It is all in good fun;
I will, of course, not
   kill you.
I only want to admire your beauty,
Your shiny, capturing colors.
Then I will let you loose
And you will disappear into the deep, dark abyss
   Forever.

I close my eyes only to blink and,
Yes, a tug, a pull,
I’ve got you now!
How easy that was, I thought,
As I raised my stick
Up, up, up.

But what is this?
My bait is gone!
My hook is bare, shamefully
   exposed.
Curse you, fish!
You are nothing but a crook!
Stealing my bait
And surrendering nothing in return,
You are more cruel than the devil himself!
Stop tormenting me and
Bite the bait, the piercing hook.
Bite!

But it is no use,
He is gone, satisfied after his full
And tasty meal.
Thief.
You are too slimy, too cowardly
To bite and approach and face
   me,
Eye to eye, man to fish.
Well then! Have your fun now, because
I will be back
   tomorrow.




2 comments:

  1. Haha. I love this! I imagined you at the end of the world when I read it :)

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  2. haha, I'm so happy/proud that you know the names of places in my hometown:)

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